Thank you for sharing this Ben.
I like that you have used a wider range of punctuation. The questions really help to understand the character’s feelings too. 2 house points.
Perhaps have a final edit – can you spot the missing capital letters for proper nouns?
Well done, keep working hard!
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Thank you for sharing this Ben.
I like that you have used a wider range of punctuation. The questions really help to understand the character’s feelings too. 2 house points.
Perhaps have a final edit – can you spot the missing capital letters for proper nouns?
Well done, keep working hard!